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Walking along the beech.
                                   Hand in hand.
                                                      Dolphins jumping with such grace.   
                                                                                                       Wishing time would stop, just for them.
                           The midnight sky right above.      
                                                                      Letting no one else in. Sand, so soft and warm.                        
        Wanting each other, never letting go.  
                                                            Stars watching from above.          
                                                                                                  This love cannot last forever.
            The night growing colder and colder.
                                                              She feel’s he needs better.
                                                                                                        The steady movement of the waves crashing on the beech.
                                                                                   He doesn’t understand he feel’s numb.
           The beech is empty, no one there anymore.
                                                                                                                       

                                                         Lost.
                                                                                                                                    
:icondarkrockfaerie:
Just something I came out with, thought it sounded ok so I thought I'd post it. I tryed to compare the surroundings with there "Love" and tryed to set it out differently...... :p
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~XxLeeshaxX Jul 31, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
Yes, you were very creative with the line spacing and stuff, lol... Bored, Or just being unique, both works for me :D Nice job... Note: Beach* lol ;) Sorry... im... a... spelling freak... Yes, Sorry > .< Im a d0rk. *continues with the deviations ive never seen before*
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:icondarkrockfaerie:
Arh! No! Its fine! Prefere honest comments than none at all :) :o :)
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~XxLeeshaxX Jul 31, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
:D I'm usually honest, lol :)
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~snazy-a-tastic May 27, 2004   Photographer
I really love the way this is layed out and written!
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:icondarkrockfaerie:
Arh thankies! Thank you for the Fav too!! :D :hug:
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:iconfragilemacabre:
Uh. Beach, you mean. Among other numerous spelling issues.

That notwithstanding, this is brilliance. Good job. :+favlove:
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:icondarkrockfaerie:
I'm no good with spelling :( Thanks for the comment though :D :hug:
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:iconhurtbyherheart:
I love it! It's really good. The lay out works well too! Nice job! :)
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:icondarkrockfaerie:
Arh!! Thank you very much :D Thank you for the fav :D :hug:
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~punkgoddess May 25, 2004  Student Photographer
I love the way you set this up...it's really beautiful. :hug: I like it.

-punkgoddess

p.s.
it's BEACH
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